Bedazzle and Bedizen

Are you guilty of over adorning your prose? Are you in love with description? Do adjectives make you swoon?

Well, stop it.

Think of your audience. It’s about as difficult as this little girl to ride a bike in her dress as it is for a reader to wade through lines of flowery explanation. And probably as much fun.


Las Meninas, by Diego Velázquez


About Sandy Green

I am a poet and children's author. Visit my website at
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