Quick Like a Bunny – Three Revising Strategies

Here are three fast ideas for revising your work:

  1. Rearrange your paragraphs. First goes to last. Beginning and ending lines do a switcheroo. Notice any improvement?
  2. Do you need to add or cut any details? Have you said enough about the character’s feelings and reactions? Or too much, so the pace of the story slows?
  3. Change passive verbs to active verbs.

REVISION CLIPART

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About Sandy Green

I am a poet and children's author. Visit my website at sandradgreen.webs.com
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